|"To destroy me is to destroy Him. To destroy Him, is to end me."|
Roses III: Blood RedA word. Face turned away to the silent distance,Roses III: Blood Red by Exillior
A mirror of pain within eyes too young for this dance.
Terraced landscape down her graceful teenage spine,
Chin to knees, arms arched in a perfect synchrony of limbs.
She closed her stinging eyes and wished, as she inhaled the starchy air of the studio, that it was that easy to forget the ruins she had just postponed from her mind. With the abandon of despair, she chased one joint with another, her body a perfect arch of visual melody. Hers was the ballet of discordant precision, as she ravaged onto her body the same cacophony that her emotions drummed out onto her heart.
Within the darkness behind her eyelids, she aligned breath with heartbeat, following the disastrous staccato within her chest, reminding herself that the gallop of contained thunder therein was normal.
All was normal. It was natural to shatter continuously. She was all sinewy muscle, able to handle storm after storm.
Character MotivationCharacter Motivation by illuminara
Everyone's heard that characters should have goals, something they want and must strive for, overcoming obstacles and antagonists in order to obtain. Because, well, a story is the record of your character's journey toward achieving a goal.
While all of this is true, I think a lot of writers lose sight of an even more important aspect of character. That is, motivation. Sure, you know what your character wants.
That's the gist of motivation. What is the psychology and reasoning behind your character's goal? If your character is driven to make money, is his motivation greed? To pay off a debt? To support his family?
Motivation is your character's emotional connection with the reader. When the reader comes to understand why your character has set out to achieve his goal, they will understand your character in human terms, relate to him, and become invested in what happens to your character throughout the story.
Without a clear motivation, your character's goals don't mean much. So wha
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I am a college graduate, holding an Associate's of Applied Science (focus: Interactive Design), an avid illustrator and hopeful writer. I can attest to a life of failure and achievement. One step forward frequenting two steps back. An optimistic pessimist. |
I aim to improve and one day be successful, and in the meantime enjoy the journey.